Revised , poem- Time's Kaleidoscope?

There are many thought provoking lines in your poem, and the poem as a whole is reflective. The image of the maze is very effective as well. I would change the last line to something a bit shorter so as to flow well; perhaps just "will we see clearly through Time's Kaleidoscope" and perhaps lengthen the preceding line to "Only when we have love, and hope". That way the whole poem flows more smoothly. Just a kind of nit picky suggestion, though. It is a wonderful poem. Thank you.